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Melody felt a cold shiver as she looked at the house she once loved.
There was always a mystery to the house; she knew others knew it too.
The man that died in the house that faithful day of June took years off her life. That was a bad day. She could not forget the look on his face, the look of death.
She knew she had to get away.
Her beauty was slipping so fast. She fought it as long as she could. If only she could find the fountain of youth. And find her Love.
Selling her home and taking off to the beach where she had so many memories, she was actually starting to feel young again.
But on that warm day in July walking in the sand, daydreaming, letting the waves roll over her feet and ankles. She looked up she saw the man in her dreams;
He stood before her
Imperfection visible
In long drawn out prose
With sentences and paragraphs
That seemed longer than earth
She smiles and kissed life
And remembered pain
The sun drops cuts from its sting
Yet they drift
A thousand miles away;
Her words dissolve like a broken record
Distracted with failing light
Each drop of them
Is collected
Natures gift to those who come
To put out the shimmering fires of the
Live of thine.
A rhythmic melody of light and sound
As the touch of them
Bestows her;
The kiss was bitter at first
The shyness over took them
Then it was nourished
And then was strong
As Dusk hit that day, and they lay side by side. How wonderful to be held pretending to be lovers. Tangled in a prolonged embrace and enjoying soft kisses. The touch of the look to each side made the fantasy that much more.
A hopeless romantic was she, but she knew this was doomed from the start.
You see she was doomed with complications to die a thousand deaths and every time she looked away, he fell more and more in the grave.
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nice work as usual, deborah
Thankyou dr. Truthman..thank you for visiting...and commenting...debbie
As usual Debbie, a very well done short story and poem. Allot of thought, sensitivity and emotion. Beautifully done. A job very well done.
Thankyou vellur...you are so kind.....
I cannot find words to describe the way you write. You are awesome. This is beautiful. Voted up as always.
Thank you debby..that means a lot to me...have ca wonderful day.debbie
Very deep thoughts, Debbie. The longing, hurt and pain expressed in your story and poem. Blessings, Debby
Good evening Polly.. always nice to see you my dear.. thanks for visiting and commenting..
Debbie
A mysterious path every time. Voted up.
Thank you ruchira...what a kind thing to say..have a great day....debbie
Debbie you are brilliant and your work personifies it....cheers!
thank you eddy.. you are so kind.. you make me glad i write... thank you dear friend..
debbie
Oh Debbie this ne was brilliant. I love your own natural style and your hubs never disappoint.
Take care my very dear friend and I have to award you with that up up and away.
Eddy.
wow Epi.. thank you I am so honored.. debbie
...I just reviewed Caroline's new poem - there is a video link dedicated to both of you there - along with all of the other ladies in the FACEBOOK and HUBPAGE house
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Epi.. you inspire me and make me glad that I write.. What a wonderful person you are.
Take care my friend
Debbie
...well if I yearn to become a romantic poet/writer then I must pay my respects and learn and be inspired by the best - and oh dear Deborah you do inspire me - greatly!
See you on Facebook,as posted, with this one - my one of a kind!!
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Thank you Stars and Caroline.. Like you I love to write. thank you for your kind words and your encouragement. Have a blessed day.
Debbie
What a beautiful and romantic poem. I will be buying your book of poems. They always touch my heart. Keep writing! :)
I will have to read it again to fully understand it, but your work is brilliant, and wonderful. I think everyone will learn more about writing from you precious heart. God Bless You.
Thank you Scentualhealing.. Have a great day.
simply smashing!
Thank you Sky and Movie.. You don't know how I appreciate your words.. Have a blessed day.
Debbie
Incredible writing Debbie, thank you and voted up
You simply pick the best songs. This is a beautiful story! Sometimes when a story flows so effortlessly, I tend to think it's that persons who wrote the story, it's their true life story I am reading. Like their life experiences.
Good work Deborah.
Bless.
Thank You Picklesand.. Have a blessed day
debbie
really enjoyed your hub! Beautiful writing indeed!!!
Thank you joyce and frank...so glad you enjoyed it..have a blessed day..debbie
You arrived this was simply fantastic!!!! oh and the title..yeah perfect
Thank you for such a beautiful read this morning. Vote up and awesome. Joyce
Thank you
senoritaa.. thanks for visiting and commenting.
Debbie
Uniquely written. Starts off being predictable but ends in a totally different tone.
Thank you Gina.. You are awesome
Very interesting story and poem. It reads like a mystery book with a twist of love mixed in.
Oh Johnny.. I am honored. You are a great poet. When I read your poetry I am taken away in a land of love and sometimes pain. Thank you Johnny.. Have a blessed day.
You truly are a painter of words. Each words does show its life in your eyes. "EACH DROP OF THEM IS COLLECTED", Wow, that is so the tears felt raining from the gods hearts. Lovely this is.
thank you tarajeyaram and blossom..
Ian
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gypsy..
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and mIchelle
thank you all for visiting and commenting..what wonderful comments..all of you are awesome writers. your words make me so proud I am a writer..
HAVE A WONDERFUL DAY
DEBBIE
Wow, you are an amazing poet and writer. I am looking forward to reading more of your hubs, well books and poety
You see she was doomed with complications to die a thousand deaths and every time she looked away, he fell more and more in the grave.
This was a perfect finish.
The sun drops cuts from its sting
Yet they drift
A thousand miles away;
Her words dissolve like a broken record
Distracted with failing light
Each drop of them
Is collected
Natures gift to those who come.
I could read these words a thousand times..
What can I say, you understand true lovers heart..
And with the most amazing words you explain their thoughts.
Great Hub.. All the way from top to finish line.
Wow really awesome Debby.
Deborah, this is a bit sad but beautiful and different, loved it.
Beautiful hub. Voted up.
Very lovely.
Beautifully written. Voted up and beautiful.
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thank you PDXKaraokeGuy for visiting and commenting. have a great evening
Debbie